Kia ora Neha. Thanks for sharing another task. I wonder if you could build on your awesome ideas by making them tongue twisters just like in the story you heard for the task. Maybe something like 'shopping for scrumptious, super snacks.' What do you think.
It is Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
Ka pai on giving this activity a go!! Mmm, yummy breakfast! Do you often go to breakfast at your neighbour’s house? That will be so cool if so! I had dinner with my neighbours last night!
What a lovely summer Saturday plan! Do you have cousins that will join you at the beach? How about siblings? It’s always fun going with a bunch of people.
I appreciate the photos you included. I wonder if you can add more in? Also, have a go at making the sentences a bit wacky! With every word starting with the same letter (this is called an alliteration), or have some great rhymes going on!
Thank you for sharing your mahi, I can see you put a lot of thought and effort into the task. It is great to see that you have included some awesome images to complement the written work. It is Awesome to see that you get to go to the beach, I think we are so lucky in New Zealand to be close to the beach. When I loved in South Africa it took seven hours to get to the nearest beach by car. What is your favorite thing about Summer?
Keep up the Super work and I hope to see more of your posts during the Summer Learning Journey!!
Kia ora Neha. Thanks for sharing another task. I wonder if you could build on your awesome ideas by making them tongue twisters just like in the story you heard for the task. Maybe something like 'shopping for scrumptious, super snacks.' What do you think.
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ReplyDeleteIt is Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
Ka pai on giving this activity a go!! Mmm, yummy breakfast! Do you often go to breakfast at your neighbour’s house? That will be so cool if so! I had dinner with my neighbours last night!
What a lovely summer Saturday plan! Do you have cousins that will join you at the beach? How about siblings? It’s always fun going with a bunch of people.
I appreciate the photos you included. I wonder if you can add more in? Also, have a go at making the sentences a bit wacky! With every word starting with the same letter (this is called an alliteration), or have some great rhymes going on!
Pai mahi, Neha!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Kia Ora
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Thank you for sharing your mahi, I can see you put a lot of thought and effort into the task. It is great to see that you have included some awesome images to complement the written work. It is Awesome to see that you get to go to the beach, I think we are so lucky in New Zealand to be close to the beach. When I loved in South Africa it took seven hours to get to the nearest beach by car. What is your favorite thing about Summer?
Keep up the Super work and I hope to see more of your posts during the Summer Learning Journey!!
Remember to have a Super Summer!!!
Ngā mihi,
Quein