Todays task was to make a poem with the words they gave to us .I used a sunset because we would go to watch sunset in singapore,Sadly I coud not do the step up because I hade a half hour time limit to do it.
Chris here again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
Well done on completing this poetry slam task! Did you enjoy it? This is a really well done poem, although I hope your childhood and others’ wasn’t too “lonely”! How long have you been away from Singapore? I bet the sunsets there are beautiful.
Kia ora Neha. Great poem. The word lonely was a twist I wasn't expecting at the end. Maybe if you have some time later in the week you could record your poem or do the step it up. Also don;t forget to keep entering your poems into the slam using this form.
Kia ora Neha!
ReplyDeleteChris here again, from the Summer Learning Journey.
Well done on completing this poetry slam task! Did you enjoy it? This is a really well done poem, although I hope your childhood and others’ wasn’t too “lonely”! How long have you been away from Singapore? I bet the sunsets there are beautiful.
Looking forward to seeing what else you post!
Ngā mihi,
Chris
Kia ora Neha. Great poem. The word lonely was a twist I wasn't expecting at the end. Maybe if you have some time later in the week you could record your poem or do the step it up. Also don;t forget to keep entering your poems into the slam using this form.
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