What an amazing poem you have written! Is that how you will feel returning to school in February?
For the SLJ Slam Poetry Rua task, you are asked to create a Kennings poem. It can either be about an animal or summer. Here is the link here to refresh your memory: https://summerlearningjourney.blogspot.com/2021/12/poetry-slam-rua.html
Have a go at creating a kennings poem and recording it! When you have, I can put your points through!
This is Ruby. I'm a volunteer from the SLJ commenting team. I really love your poem. It is so whimsical, which means playful and curious and fun. Your voice is also really confident reading it out on the video, I can hear the energy in it!
I'm wondering to myself, who is Neha? Is that a sibling of yours who is really restless when they are at school and then super relaxed once it reaches the holiday period? This is an interesting picture your paint about a character in few words, which is good story telling. Well done.
Cool picture of your classmates in the video, too. Is that a mural you all painted behind you? I'm enjoying the hot pink colour.
Kia ora Neha!
ReplyDeleteIt’s Charlotte here from the SLJ commenting team!
What an amazing poem you have written! Is that how you will feel returning to school in February?
For the SLJ Slam Poetry Rua task, you are asked to create a Kennings poem. It can either be about an animal or summer. Here is the link here to refresh your memory: https://summerlearningjourney.blogspot.com/2021/12/poetry-slam-rua.html
Have a go at creating a kennings poem and recording it! When you have, I can put your points through!
Good luck, and happy writing!
Ngā mihi nui,
Charlotte :)
Kia ora Neha,
ReplyDeleteThis is Ruby. I'm a volunteer from the SLJ commenting team. I really love your poem. It is so whimsical, which means playful and curious and fun. Your voice is also really confident reading it out on the video, I can hear the energy in it!
I'm wondering to myself, who is Neha? Is that a sibling of yours who is really restless when they are at school and then super relaxed once it reaches the holiday period? This is an interesting picture your paint about a character in few words, which is good story telling. Well done.
Cool picture of your classmates in the video, too. Is that a mural you all painted behind you? I'm enjoying the hot pink colour.
Keep up the good work.
Ruby :)
Hi Ruby,
DeleteThanks for the comment. If you are still wondering I am Neha.